MARK ME progress... sorta
Nov. 22nd, 2009 11:21 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
sonjajadewell, many rotations later, I finally got Inu's head angled right. Now I'm experimenting with the rest of his body.
Here's where I kinda stopped...
And here's where I'm planning on taking it (roughly sketched in)
I want lots of blood.
Tell me things like: Is Kagome's body out of proportion with her head?
I know Inu's hand and all is not in the right proportion yet but I don't have a reference pic, so I'm kinda winging it.
EDITING TO SHOW CHANGES I MADE TO COMPARE SIDE BY SIDE!
Alright, still working on the age thing. but look at how much better her mouth looks!! And Inu doesn't look quite so scary anymore, Kag's body is alot closer to proportion now... it's getting there *Sigh*
Here's where I kinda stopped...
And here's where I'm planning on taking it (roughly sketched in)
I want lots of blood.
Tell me things like: Is Kagome's body out of proportion with her head?
I know Inu's hand and all is not in the right proportion yet but I don't have a reference pic, so I'm kinda winging it.
EDITING TO SHOW CHANGES I MADE TO COMPARE SIDE BY SIDE!
Alright, still working on the age thing. but look at how much better her mouth looks!! And Inu doesn't look quite so scary anymore, Kag's body is alot closer to proportion now... it's getting there *Sigh*
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Date: November 23rd, 2009 05:12 am (UTC)I think if I made her mouth smaller too she would look younger. That Steven Tyler mouth is horrible lol.
I will trim Inu's arm down, I was just trying to get an idea for hand placement and size... the blood is gonna be tricky too, I've not drawn liquid before really.
Also, I agree about Inu looking kinda like a freakazoid. I'm not sure how to get him across with his demonic transformation without making him look completely like someone else. Maybe lowering his eyelids a bit and enlarging the eyes in general will help a bit. Like I told Jinxy, Imma keep tweaking it. I'm determined to make this work lol.
the whole point I'm trying to get across is that marking **HURTS** almost all the fics I've read (guilty of writing a few myself) say it's painless and so sweet and romantic, but this is a demon act that is painful for a human. I want to show the horror and the pain of it.