WIP writing meme

[sonjajade]

Post the first sentence (or three) from every WIP you're currently working on, even if it's very short. Then invite people to ask questions about your WIPs. With any luck, the motivation to take that WIP one step closer to completion will appear as if by magic!  I'm posting 3 sentences, and WARNING: there be lolicon in these words.


Blood +, Mao/Okamura untitled oneshot:
“C’mon Mao, it’s been hours…  I need a cigarette!”
The girl beside him rolled her eyes.  “Y’know, you really should be thanking me,” she snapped.  “Because you don’t smoke like a freight train anymore, we’ve been saving nearly ¥15,000 a week.” 

FMA, Roy/preteen!Elysia, 'Elysia's Blood':
When Roy Mustang heard the turn of the key in the door, he became almost like an excited puppy upon their master’s return.  Elysia’s perpetual after-school scowl gave him an excuse to ‘cheer her up’, and she enjoyed giving in to his skilled touches.  When they’ve finished playing, she’s all lazy smiles and smug contentment as his semen flows down, clinging to her inner thighs and the old rag towels they’ve been using to keep from staining the sheets of his bed.

FMA, Al/Mei, 'Fan Dance':
Al watched her intently, unable to believe how gracefully she could move in so much silk.  Slow, sensuous, deliberate movements had him entranced, the music and the fragrance of incense in the air, the darkness around him and the brightness of several stage lights enveloping her…  It was mesmerizing.

FMA, untitled Ling/Lan Fan:

The day after the Elric family, Mustang and Mrs. Curtis saved the world from the being known as “Father”, Ling Yao gathered up his bodyguard Lan Fan, her grandfather Fu’s body, and his little half sister, Mei Chang, and made their way back to their home in Xing, ready to present the Emperor with the philosopher’s stone that Lan Fan had recovered.  On the train ride from Central to the most eastern city on the border of the desert, Mei and Xiao Mei slept, and in essence, Ling and Lan Fan were alone for the first time in a very long time.

She kept nodding off, lulled to sleep by the rumble of the rails beneath them and the warmth of the sunshine streaming through the window.  Ling had convinced her to dress as a normal traveler and not in her assassin’s garb, and the contrast of her raven dark hair on the yellow sweater she wore over the printed dress made Ling stop and take a closer look at her than he ever could remember doing before.

FMA, Winry/Roy lolicon untitled:

When Col. Roy Mustang stepped through the door of the Rockbell house, Winry nearly gasped.  He was tall, dark and handsome, dashing in his good looks and inspiring with the way he came in and jerked Edward out of that wheelchair, demanding to know what he’d done and what he planned to do.

Winry fell completely and totally in love with the man.

InuYasha, Miroku/Sango 'Moving Up':
She was warm in his arms.  Her embrace had become home to him over the past few weeks, and he suspected that feeling would only grow stronger as their marriage progressed.  The hut was shut up tight against the chill of the early spring night, the fire was perfect, and he allowed himself a moment to just relax completely for a moment, just enjoy this moment for as long as he could.

InuYasha, Miroku/Rin lolicon 'Moonlight':
I watched her grow from a gangly, dirty child into a strong and hearty young lady.  Dirty, tangled hair back then is now long and soft and shiny.  Gapped teeth have been lost and her adult ones are straight and pretty when she smiles. 

InuYasha, Miroku/Sango 'A New Way':
I love the look she wears on her face when I bite gently at her belly button…  The look of lust that comes over her is nearly breathtaking, as she is well aware that I am sliding south on her body with a purpose.  My sweet girl knows that this lecherous mouth will soon be on her most sensitive place, and she knows I won’t leave her wanting; I shall gladly see my deadly mistress fulfilled.

InuYasha, Sesshomaru/Rin AU, an extension of a one shot into a proper full length fic 'One of These Days':
He sighed heavily behind the oak desk that had become where he spent the majority of his time now.  There was an open bottle of brandy there and a bottle of aspirin partially spilled across the leather inset.  On one corner of the desk sat a stack of manila file folders, organized by date; the other corner held a slew of messier folders that had color coded arrow stickers indicating where his elegant signature needed to be placed. 

InuYasha, Ayame/Koga, 'Koga's Apology':
It wasn’t often that she was stopped dead in her tracks, mouth and eyes wide open in disbelief and shock…  But when something happened to cause such a reaction, Ayame was sure to remember the event forever.

Her mighty grandfather lay by a roaring fire, and sitting near him was Koga.

InuYasha, Miroku & InuYasha, 'Nobody's Fool'
They were just about to leave and make their way back home when three young girls scurried to Miroku’s side, two of which were giggling and shoving the third into him.  The little beauty looked up at him with flushed cheeks and smiling eyes and said, “Houshi-sama, I’d be honored if you would allow me…”  She covered her mouth, giggling before continuing, “If you would allow me to repay you for ridding our village of the specter that has haunted us for so long…  I have a place we can go…”

InuYasha, InuYasha/Rin, 'Replacements'
Seven years.

The well had stopped working altogether.  Its purpose was served and now it was nothing more than a dried up, splintery, cobweb filled structure. 


FMA, Al/Mei/Roy/Riza/Ling/Lan Fan/Ed/Winry, ot_wholecast fic 'Yinyue Yizi':
“Are you sure this is a good idea?” Ed asked as Mei sat four chairs together, their backs all touching and forming a square.  “I mean…  Hell, I’m pretty sure this just isn’t a good idea.”

Star Wars: The Old Republic, Shinra/Quinn (my untitled game fic XD):
Baras was getting under her skin.  While he might be her master, she felt a contempt for him that served only to fuel her power.  Wasn’t he supposed to be imparting his secrets about the Force to her?

I think that's it with the exception of the 2 mary sue fics XDDDDDDDDDD

Comments

[bay115.livejournal.com]

All of your FMA ones are interesting. For your Ling/Lan Fan one, is it the story you mentioned before where Ling becomes Emperor?

And gah, Yinyue Yizi! XD Hopefully after Big Bang I'll be able to look over it and then maybe we can talk a bit about co-writing it, LOL. Kinda questioning my porn writing skills though after I had missyquill looked over some of my Big Bang, haha.

[sonjajade.livejournal.com]

LOL Don't worry. I'd be glad to help if I can, all my arts are done!

and that Ling/Lan Fan is different from that other one. After Big Bang missyquill and I are going to work on it together.

[bay115.livejournal.com]

Haha thanks for the offer but that's fine. Having two betas is enough. :P I think I'll change that one sex scene into after-sex cuddling because political talks during sex is AWKWARD~ (my other beta thought the same thing lol). XD;

Oh, very nice. Looking forward to your guys' Ling/Lan Fan story!

[sonjajade.livejournal.com]

here's the first paragraph from that, currently titled 'Complete Devotion'

Ling didn’t like this. Didn’t like this at all. His father’s health had begun to improve a bit since the prince returned with the philosopher’s stone, and all Ling’s plans for their powerful nation (and his personal agenda of taking his most favorite bodyguard as his bride) remained indefinitely on hold. With his new found secured destiny as next in line for the throne, he was given opulent quarters at the imperial palace and he literally wanted for nothing, but this did nothing assuage his deepest desires to promote healthy trade and diplomacy between Xing and Amestris, to take Lan Fan for his own, and now…

[bay115.livejournal.com]

Like it a lot! :D

[missyquill.livejournal.com]

Trust me, your porn writing skills are much MUCH better than mine. :) Don't take anything I say too much to heart, I sometimes have no freaking idea what I'm talking about. As Sonja will tell you, my beta style is "special" and totally unprofessional. It mostly consists of what i "think" will work and I "feel" wouldn't. I generally forget the readership isn't made up of myself alone. *blush*

[sonjajade.livejournal.com]

I love your beta style honey, don't change when you work with me!

And I can help with the sexy parts if you like, not necessarily as a beta, but I'm around if you need me!