umm, can someone take a look at this fic for me?

[sonjajade]

It's an FMA gift exchange fic.  I don't want to keep bothering seatbeltdrivein  with it because she's busy enough for 3 people, but I would like someone to read this thing for me and tell me if I'm doing alright with Ed's characterization.  After a total of 5 restarts, this is the only version of this fic I haven't completely scraped.  I'd like to be sure it feels okay before I keep going, because I don't want to write a whole big thing and then it not be right and have to start allllll over again.

If anyone's interested lemme know.

Comments

[bay115.livejournal.com]

I'm willing to look at it. I have written Ed a few times, so I should be able to look carefully over his characterization. My email is rubyseadra@hotmail.com

[sonjajade.livejournal.com]

ok, it's incoming!

[bay115.livejournal.com]

Okay, got it. Will email you my thoughts over it later tonight! :D