Rework of my first lolicon
Oct. 20th, 2009 09:41 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
sonjajadeWell, I took it down, reworked it and now it's something I'm proud of.
So if you're interested, here it is, renamed and thoroughly edited to fix Rin's tone to match her age, fixed the constantly lapsing speech patterns, and just generally improved it. I might be adding a pic too, I have an idea but I dunno if I can get out on paper/ in photoshop the way I want to. We'll see...
The Final Thread as seen at FF.net
Still workin on other pieces too, I want to add a chapter to Dolls and I'm still trying to figure out the best way to execute the lemon in Shuffle. I have a nice start but I feel like I'm starting to repeat myself. thank god for thesaurus.com >_<
So if you're interested, here it is, renamed and thoroughly edited to fix Rin's tone to match her age, fixed the constantly lapsing speech patterns, and just generally improved it. I might be adding a pic too, I have an idea but I dunno if I can get out on paper/ in photoshop the way I want to. We'll see...
The Final Thread as seen at FF.net
Still workin on other pieces too, I want to add a chapter to Dolls and I'm still trying to figure out the best way to execute the lemon in Shuffle. I have a nice start but I feel like I'm starting to repeat myself. thank god for thesaurus.com >_<
