Anyone care to help me on some fics?

[sonjajade]

As y'all know, I've been trying to finish up some works in progress, mostly one shots that I just have had lingering on the thumbdrive for a while.  If anyone would like to take a look at them and give me some suggestions, I'd be thrilled to get some feedback oh what's already written and where I should go from there.

BLOOD+:  2 fics, a Saya/Haji post canon anime, and a Mao/Okamura (also post canon).  Saya/Haji is looking like a waff-y smut piece and Mao/Okamura could be a humorous smut piece but I'm not sure what direction that should go in.

TRIGUN: I started out like a house on fire and then petered out. I just want to know where I should end it.  It's already kinda long imo.  It's a Wolfwood/Milly where Wolfwood doesn't die and Milly is preggo with his baby.  They've been seperated for a long time because Wolfwood was badly injured and really did almost die, but eventually he finds his way back to her just as she goes into labor.  Was thinking of throwing some Vash/Meryl in for balance.  Open to suggestions with that.

FMA: This was my otwholecast submission for this fandom that I never quite got going.  It's Mei/Al, Ed/Win, Ling/Lan Fan and Roy/Riza, but all switched up because of Xingese musical chairs (a game that actually sounds like a lot of fun).  Needs lemons, but there's a lot of them to write, and the pairings are all flubbed (Roy/Mei, Ling/Win, Ed/Lan Fan, Al/Riza).  If you want to think about this one, lemme know!  OPEN TO DOING A COLLABORATION!


I think I'm just burnt out on lemons.  How many different ways are there to fuck after all? -__-" sigh.

Anyway, if anyone's interested let me know and I'll shoot em out to ya!

Comments

[bay115.livejournal.com]

I'm not familiar with Blood+ or Trigun, so I can't help you there with those stories. D: As for the FMA one, I would soooo totally collab with you on that story if I wasn't busy with fmabigbang and later on my second help_japan fic. D: I'm willing to beta read it, though!

[sonjajade.livejournal.com]

hey now, I can wait til you are in a place where we can colab. There's no rush to finish it at all, and I'd love to let you read what I already have. I know I will need your POV skills, because there's 8 POVs to take into account O_O

It needs a 3rd person perspective but I dunno if I've done that.

I think I'll send it to you and you read it when you can. It's called Yinyue Yizi, what google translate says is Musical Chair in chinese,

[missyquill.livejournal.com]

"How many different ways are there to fuck after all?"

THIS, I TOTAL;LY UNDERSTAND. When I first discovered smut fics, I went nuts. Bad BAD idea (I was sixteen, so sue me) but I read so much that within the first few weeks, it lost all it's charm. And now I only read smut with characters I like/care about, not just any random PWP.

I don't know the other fandoms but I wouldn't mind colabing with you either. If Bay is too busy that is. I have a bunch of contests and other things too but hey, what's one more going to do. I always have something going on ALL THE TIME! Besides, the words "Xingese musical chair" have highly piqued my interest. XD

[sonjajade.livejournal.com]

I'll gladly send you a copy of what I have for Yinue Yizi! I really wish I could revitalize the comm I was writing it for too. 'Ending ship wars with entire cast orgies!' was the comm's motto! I'll send the fic sometime today.