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umm, can someone take a look at this fic for me?
It's an FMA gift exchange fic. I don't want to keep bothering ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
seatbeltdrivein with it because she's busy enough for 3 people, but I would like someone to read this thing for me and tell me if I'm doing alright with Ed's characterization. After a total of 5 restarts, this is the only version of this fic I haven't completely scraped. I'd like to be sure it feels okay before I keep going, because I don't want to write a whole big thing and then it not be right and have to start allllll over again.
If anyone's interested lemme know.
seatbeltdrivein with it because she's busy enough for 3 people, but I would like someone to read this thing for me and tell me if I'm doing alright with Ed's characterization. After a total of 5 restarts, this is the only version of this fic I haven't completely scraped. I'd like to be sure it feels okay before I keep going, because I don't want to write a whole big thing and then it not be right and have to start allllll over again.If anyone's interested lemme know.